For the time being I've gone back in and ripped out A LOT of the voiceover, so that it might not make much sense listening to it out of context and maybe not much sense in context either at this point in time. There aren't any gaps where there should be and the the flow isn't correct at all, so ignore this aspect for the time being! While chopping the narrative into smaller fragments I'm really looking to play up the silence and the story's ambiguity in the soundtrack. It's going to take some experimentation, and a bit courage and conviction to get things correct. It's already feeling a lot leaner now - more narrative less audiobook.