A lot of changes since the last update. After some discussions about how to reduce the complexity of the voice-over, most if not all instances of the narrator describing sound as it happens has been removed, except in cases where helps makes sense of the situation. Sound appears in red, to help differentiate it from the spoken text. Extra dialogue has been added to the opening conversation between the family, mostly to help with exposition and set up the emotional impact later on in the story. This text is very placeholdery at the moment and will undergo the most change for the final script in the next update.
Monkey Paw Script Draft