Wednesday, 17 March 2010

Transcription: Scene with moving camera



So if anything this proves that the scene needs to LOTS of refining to look acceptable as time based media.

3 comments:

matt hyland said...

where are the crazy yellow glowy things? that where there in your earlier concept drawing bellow...

Tom Beg said...

Those were a separate render, come the final thing they will added again :)

tutorphil said...

Hey Tom,

As discussed - this simple animation really amps up the potential for your project to become something special and unique - what it needs now is much more muscularity from you - a case of 'more, more, more!' Also, put your scenes in the round - work inside a circular set to create more opportunities and to open up your sight-lines; consider too a more organic 'glow' as if power is pulsing - and I'd suggest that you need to 'round out' your figures - but keep them lo-fi - like cut-out card forms - like those Christmas paper decorations that open up from the flat to a shape... very exciting stuff - and I want to see more excitement from you; this should be your finest hour!